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The Food of the Gods and How It Came To Earth[edit]

Recently contributed. Constructive comments appreciated.

  • It would be helpful if there were some more information about the book before the spoiler part; perhaps some of the information from the later sections which indicate notability, give information on the adaptations, etc. could be moved up. I generally stop reading as soon as I get to the spoiler part, especially since the warning seemed to cover so much. If you could have a vague plot outline and other nonspoiler information, and then put the spoilerful plot summary at the end, I think that would be more useful. Also, "to" should not be capitalized in the page title. -- Creidieki 17:19, 19 Sep 2004 (UTC)